THE INTERNATIONAL STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM
Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school.
To what extend do
the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, globalisation goes through
every sector of the social life. Thereby, education has not been ignored. International exchange visits are seen differently. We do agree that
it profits the young pupils but it still has a few drawbacks.
Teens get many
outcomes from their contact with another country, thus another culture and even
another language. They experience a cultural integration and another way of
seeing and doing things. Moreover, their behaviour improves and broadens in
case they get into a richer culture than theirs. Additionally, teenagers
nourish a mind-set of competitors which in turn will tends them at promoting
their different countries thereby inciting each other to visit their counties
or to even settle there. It should be also noted that pupils who experience
such exchange get more and more open to the world and become aware of what is
to be improved in his own country. So, the main target of education being the guarantee
of an openness to the world is ensured through that exchange.
However, it important to note that
however predominant its advantages are, the international exchange visits still
have some drawbacks. First of all, the travel fees are too high. As a result,
some pupils find themselves left behind due to their social status. It results
in selective education thereby frustration. Secondly, when in contact with
other pupils with different culture or religion teenagers may be negatively
influenced or affected by their thoughts or behaviours. Finally, the risk of
accidents is there even if it does not occur frequently.
In summary, moving for an educational purpose is part of education. For it provides the learners with cross bound experiences and new knowledge at the price of an insignificant drawback.

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Strengths of the publication
*Topic is good
*Good paragraphing
*Content informative.
What to improve
* Topic sentence needs the writer assertion.
*It's not acceptable to think or support that one might encounter a culture richer than his/her one. Of course some might be poor in one's culture and we need to improve that in another culture. But doesn't mean it's richer than yours. So, think to say this in an acceptable way. See paragraph 2.
*editing is needed for some typos (in paragraph 2, .... visit their counties.
In the same paragraph, ......his own country. But his is referring to Students as subject. So, you should use their instead.
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